Today’s Photo of the day was the 3rd in this series of 3. With the assistance of my creative assistant, Jazz (my Papillon Puppy), I managed to finally capture the shot I wanted. This series of shots got me thinking about today’s Thursday Tips post.
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RHYTHM. SPACE. TIMING. SERENDIPITY.
A story is composed of many parts just as a photograph is composed of many elements. For a photograph you need a subject, a tool (camera), a placing in space, rhythm and perfect timing. For a story you need a plot, characters, a tool (imagination), a setting, rhythm and perfect timing.
So today’s Thursday tips is focused on: Rhythm, Space, Timing and Serendipity. What do I mean by “Rhythm”? There are 2 types of rhythm that I am thinking of: Musical Rhythm and Poetic Rhythm.
Noun: A strong, regular, repeated pattern of movement or sound.
Now you may argue that you do not have an ear for music. You do not realise that your own body has a perfect musical rhythm of its own: Heart beats. Yes. Heart Beats. Now close your eyes, place your finger at your pulse point and listen to the rhythm as you feel the drum beat of your life’s blood flowing through your body. Now if your heart’s rhythm was slightly off, too quick or too slow or skipping a beat, there would be a problem with the way your body functioned. This problem could even be fatal in the worst case scenario. In the same way, this can be an allegory for the importance of having cadence and rhythm in the construction of your story. If one word is not placed in the right space on your page the beat will be off.
Noun: a regularly recurring sequence of events, actions,
or processes : the measured flow of words and phrases
in verse or prose as determined by the relation of long
and short or stressed and unstressed syllables.
You may think you know nothing about poetry but if you were a child at some stage, you will know all about poetic rhythm. I am talking about the wonder and simplicity of Nursery Rhymes. Now I am sure if I ask you to close your eyes for a moment and think of a nursery rhyme from your childhood you will be able to come up with more than a handful. So why is this poetic rhythm so vital to your story? It is vital for the same reason that it took you less than a minute to recall more than a handful of nursery rhymes. Rhythm is strongly intertwined with memory. If something has a catchy rhythm, it tends to be locked in the vaults of your memory bank. But the connection and resonance of the “Rhythm” allows you to re-access this vault at a moment’s notice. So I ask you, what is common to successful stories throughout the ages? They are a perfect synchronicity of musical rhythm and poetic rhythm. The sentences have a resonant beat to them and they flow easily through your mind. The words are perfectly placed and sequenced. The sentences are sharp and neat. The punctuation is perfectly placed, accenting and pausing through the rhyme of the words on a page.
Space and Timing
The other two vital elements to a perfect story is setting (space) and timing. A setting can make or break the story. At times a setting can make or break a genre. Setting is an oft-forgotten but vital element in a successful story. Just as space and setting is vital to the perfect camera shot, setting is not something to be overlooked. So if you have found yourself concentrating too much on plot and character remember to include setting in your focus. After all, your characters need “Somewhere” to have a story. They cannot be in a Vacuum throughout the whole story.
Now I come to one of my favourite elements in a story: Timing. There are two types of timing in a story. The first is the Story’s sequence of events and the second is the timing in the placing of chapters, paragraphs, openings and endings. The timing of events in a sequence will make your story a well-loved hit with your readers or on the other hand the incorrect timing in sequence can alter the story at best and confuse / lose your reader at the worst. You cannot rush the sequence in your plot and you cannot go too slowly. You need to use the second type of timing I spoke of to set the correct sequence. At the same time, you cannot spend an uneven amount of time on any element of your plot. Too quick an opening may leave the reader floundering for a life raft but be too tired in the end to bother. Too slow an opening could bore your reader. Even though you may have put your best part of the story in the middle of your plot, the reader needs to still get there so time your story with care. Don’t rush your plot too quickly that you lose your reader and that your story becomes a blur in their mind. Don’t slow your plot too much or your reader will miss the suspense of the moment. Don’t rush your characters through their dialogue or accelerate their development – your reader will find them unrealistic and have no connection to the story. Don’t go too slow with your characters as by the time you have got your character to the next day, your reader will probably have fallen asleep.
Serendipity is the tie of these 3 elements: Rhythm, Space (Setting) and Timing. I love the word “Serendipity”:
Serendipity ~ the occurrence and development of events by chance in a happy or beneficial way….
Isn’t this the perfect way to describe a story that will imprint itself on your reader’s memories?
I leave you with my Poem for the day inspired by my photograph..
Flying Free on the Wings of Time
If you rush through Life,
Moments will pass by in a blur;
If you take things too slowly,
You will miss the Moments.
Like a Photograph
Life is all about being in the Moment:
Perfect Rhythm of Space. Timing. Serendipity.
~ Kim Koning ~
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7 thoughts on “Rhythm. Space. Timing. Serendipity.”
Serendipity is one of my favorite words so it was delightful to read how you wove it through the narrative below.
The combination of the photographs works brilliantly… Great post!
Looks like I’ll be doing the vampire schedule for blog visits/comments…
My day times are getting hectic…. but I’m all in. 🙂
Serendipity is a LOVELY word. It was also a perfect word for me in this post. Thanks for the comments Elizabeth! I know all about vampire schedules. I usually keep to vampire hours for my writing and my blogging. I like writing at night when it is quiet and the rest of the world is sleeping.
I like the comparison of story and photographs. There are similarities in these two arts, as there’s a similarity with music, too. It’s interesting that everyone expects musicians to have to practice, but many don’t think of writers or photographers needing to.
Thanks for your comments Kathleen. So true that people tend to think writing / photography just comes naturally and no practice is needed. I am definitely learning a lot about writing through this photography project I am doing. Amazing what insights and strengths can be learned when we stretch ourselves creatively and branch out into new forms of creativity. 🙂
Great post, Kim, and what amazing pictures.
Wonderful to see you so inspired. i can see your method is really working for you – and so inspiring for us too:)
Thanks Dee 🙂 Yes, I must say this Photography project is definitely giving me new insights into my writing. It is also inspiring me to write a poem a day to go with the photograph. Glad you find it inspiring too. 🙂